Can any research be found to validate the contention that those who spend time plucking out their gray hairs have mor...
briannafigueroaApril 24, 2020
Paraphrasing the MP
I am having trouble paraphrasing the main point passages like this one. I keep confusing the subsidiary conclusion with the conclusion. For instance, in this question I chose E thinking it paraphrased the main conclusion best. Is there any techniques I can use to better distinguish the subsidiary conclusion from the conclusion ?
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I use a "question and answer" strategy that helps me identify conclusions, sub-conclusions, and premises. To identify these pieces of the argument, we need to know which statements support which. Premises support conclusions, and not the other way around. This is not always obvious, so framing the argument in terms of questions and answers is helpful to me. Every argument follows this format:
Conclusion Why? Because premise
or
Conclusion Why? Because sub-conclusion Why? Because premise
In this argument, the conclusion is in the second sentence: there is not necessarily a connection between plucking gray hairs and negative attitudes toward the elderly.
Why?
1. Because it is reasonable to like the elderly, yet dislike impaired eyesight and hearing. 2. Because one thing is immoral and the other is not.
I can tell that these premises are meant to support the conclusion. They explain why there is not necessarily a connection.
Notice that it doesn't work the other way around:
Conclusion: Disliking the elderly is immoral, but disliking the aging process isn't. Why? Premise: Because there is not necessarily a connection between plucking gray hairs and disliking the elderly.
This doesn't really make sense, because the "not necessarily a connection" statement is the main conclusion. It is not supposed to support anything else. This is how I identified it as the main idea, which is best expressed by answer choice B. A sub-conclusion, on the other hand, will support another conclusion.